@CardboardRobot Poor timing in scenes. Confusing at times, dialog rhythm off. Characters jumping ahead suddenly to be with characters they weren't with before, with no explanation of how they met up. Action scenes that last too long (pacing) and feel like a replacement for actual story. Repetitive character types and scenes/beats. Stuff like that.
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