Ancestors

Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-08-08 at 13:58

[#]Antumbra chapter 01 page 2 finished!

Some changes compared to the initial draft, especially concerning the microscope researcher. The good-looking handsome model type didn't suit well, so I thought to go with a scruffy aesthetics...

The experiment continues with 1 more page and the past sequence is complete!

Read this way: ⬅️

For anyone who's new here and wants to know what's been done so far you download the previous chapter here: https://ntoyohito.itch.io/antumbra-chapter-00

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Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-06 at 12:52

[#]Antumbra chapter 1 pages 1&2 update:

To unwind a bit from what's happening right now I went and did some minor editing on the first two pages. The major one was the text on page two, so that there is more empty space in the bubbles, and also mirrored some images so that one can easily understand that the page is read right to left (despite not being used to manga-style orientation).

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Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-06 at 22:51

[#]Antumbra chapter 01 page 3 now ongoing!!

Blue pencil pre-inking sketch. I will do small homage to the 90s era on 2nd panel, hehe. Couldn't resist it! 4 more panels left :)

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Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-08 at 23:45

Before continuing with #Antumbra page 3 I first had to make a big change in the last two panels of page 2 and use just one. Here's the new version.

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Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-10 at 11:43

[#]Antumbra chapter 1 page 3 update:

Gradually pushing forward. Panels have been decided (I just didn't have the capacity to even do another line last night XD).

It might need some minor changes/tweaks in the panels of the man walking down the corridor, but not sure yet.

After this page Antumbra officially begins in its current timeline with it's first satiating chapter! :D

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Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-12 at 00:21

[#]Antumbra chapter 1 page 3 update:

Ended up redoing 2 panels, because the reader (you) would end up not having a clue what was happening!

Today I learned two things:

  1. when a character is facing one way, keep them facing that way, unless something majorly important needs to be conveyed (change the focus to another character for example),

  1. avoid making 180 degrees view turn, as that disorients

3 (bonus). be ready to accept that a page can be completely different from what I had in mind and should end up requiring a redoing.... 😭

Edit: man, making comics is a tough thing....

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Toot

Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-14 at 00:48

[#]Antumbra chapter 1 page 3 update:

pre-inking phase done!

Next comes inking! The excitement is real :D

This page is actually starting to shape up quite well.

And since this page taking too long I also added a teaser of the coloured version of the cover of the first volume (and not just chapter). It's rough and dirty though :P

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Descendants

Written by Nemo on 2024-11-14 at 10:16

@ntoyohito I don’t have much to say except nice job !

I can't comment every time but I always keep an eye on your pages. And it's great to see you continuing and making progress ! 😁

The cover is especially cool I think, I love the choice of colors

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Written by N Toyohito / 縁 豊人 on 2024-11-14 at 14:27

@NemoJmeno Thanks nemo!! <3

No need to comment on everything! :) I'm just super glad you're enjoying my manga making process ^^

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Written by Nemo on 2024-11-14 at 16:11

@ntoyohito Yeah but comic-making is a long process and it always help to have people around reacting to your work ! 😁

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