Ancestors

Written by Dan Luu on 2024-10-28 at 21:07

Steve Ballmer was an underrated CEO

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Written by Matthew Thomas on 2024-11-01 at 18:39

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• “not clear there wouldn't be a reason not to go → “not clear there’d be any reason not to go”

• “to things” → “to launch things”

• “when try” → “when they try”

• “group threaten” → “group threatened”

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Written by Dan Luu on 2024-11-04 at 06:54

@mpt Thanks! I fixed the last three things, but I don't think the first one is wrong and I think that changing it changes the strength of the statement so I left that one.

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Toot

Written by Matthew Thomas on 2024-11-04 at 07:19

@danluu I’m pretty sure there’s one too many negatives — a simple test is just to change “wouldn’t” to “would”. But up to you of course!

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Descendants

Written by Dan Luu on 2024-11-04 at 20:17

@mpt Ohhhhhh yeah, I see, I was only looking at two of the negatives :). Thanks for being persistent on this.

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